And I am going to share it here on my blog, hopefully, we can see some improvement over time.
So here's his 1st 5-sentence essay, My favorite food, let see how bad is it :)
Saya suka makan McDonald. Saya makan McDonald di MJC. Saya makan McDonald sekali dalam sebulan. Keluarga saya membuat pesanan dari kereta "drive thru". Selapas itu kami makan di rumah.
Written by: Eugene
Edited by: Mummy
Oh dear!!! Americanised! LOL!!! Been years and years since I last went to McD.
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